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francesca sits at the sill with swarthy legs dangling seaward. their holiday home cliffs off to the heaving ocean and together they sigh in a breathy unison. wind gushes around her, quieting her with a 'shhhhh' and gently suggesting a fall. she licks dry lips and almost succumbs to the wind's murmurs. how easy it would be for her to slip and fall weightlessly into the warm sea that held her as a child.

every april they come here and every may they leave once more. francesca leaves the city behind- and with bottles of sand and broken shells she tries to bring the sea back with her. but inspiring smoke and exhaling city air will never really be breathing, as pavements and bitumen will never be hot sand between her toes.

the ocean does not hide its desire for the girl. it aches to swim across her baked-earth skin and cling to her heavy eyelashes long after she has surfaced. its throbs and crashes against the shore with a reckless yearning. look at that, her mother had sighed once, even the sea has fallen in love with my francesca.  
and only the sea has my heart
, she had whispered.

arcs of birds skylarking above the horizon cry aloud for the setting sun. it will rise again, francesca tells them, smiling. they break into a birdsong of beautiful girls upon ledges and below water. they sing for her the way she sings for the world in the morn. the sun sets in golden hues and the birdsong stills into the ever susurrus of sea. sun becomes moon. it leaves a pool of white light on her ocean; flickering and flashing bright in the almost-night. she watches with reverence and the world watches back.
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Author's Comments

my short attention span means myriads of unfinished stories; this is one i started a few nights ago.

i'll try and finish one soon, lover-lys, in the meantime pretend this was meant to be so short or use your imagination and give life to francesca.

exohexoh

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:iconimkikyo:
I think
I prefer it unfinished.
That leaves the ending open for me to decide.

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Waheblahhableh! Waheblahhableh!! You always say that!! Misuta Barumu-- iie, Barumunku-san.

You... are an acrobat.
... and he told me a story I will never forget.
:icondaveywavey:
I enjoy your writing.
Like a lot. And so far you're the only one I'm watching who writes anything good.
So good job. = )

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:iconfrancescamm:
love the name ;)

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:iconseanfhocal:
leave it unfinished please, i like to wonder :D

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ok.first the name. it means proverb in Irish. say it with me; Shan-u-cal

:spork:=te best doomsday wepon ever there were....guys, don't laugh, im srs here, :evillaugh:
:iconohsostarryeyed:
"the ocean does not hide its desire for the girl. it aches to swim across her baked-earth skin and cling to her heavy eyelashes long after she has surfaced. its throbs and crashes against the shore with a reckless yearning. look at that, her mother had sighed once, even the sea has fallen in love with my francesca.
and only the sea has have my heart, she had whispered."

LOVE THAT.

also, do you mean "only the sea has my heart" or "only the sea has had my heart" ? i don't think 'has have my heart' is proper grammar :aww:

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:iconmidnightmelodie:
Don't worry to much about finishing it, it's lovely as it is. ^^

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:icondkl78594:
Nice description of a person's relationship with the sea. :)
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I also grew up by the ocean, so I can relate to this ^^;
Beautifully written as always, a little different from most of your stories but in a good way. :heart:

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